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		<title>By: Steph</title>
		<link>http://siriusgraphix.com/how-to-be-good-part-1/comment-page-1#comment-284</link>
		<dc:creator>Steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Jan 2010 21:40:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@ Lance: As in business, the trick with writing is to focus outward: how can you help your customer, or reader in this case? What&#039;s in it for them always comes first. And if you&#039;re editing someone else&#039;s work, how also can you help your author help your reader?

@Hilary: It&#039;s okay if you&#039;re not good at it. (If everyone was great at self-editing, I wouldn&#039;t be an editor!) Just have someone else read it through for you to catch at least the basic grammar errors and most of all give feedback on how it presents. If you&#039;re reading through yourself, again, just wait at least a few hours after you&#039;ve written it to give yourself some distance and patience.
.-= Steph&#039;s last blog post... &lt;a href=&quot;http://www.in-other-words-blog.com/2010/01/bellas-bookshelves/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Bella’s Bookshelves&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@ Lance: As in business, the trick with writing is to focus outward: how can you help your customer, or reader in this case? What&#8217;s in it for them always comes first. And if you&#8217;re editing someone else&#8217;s work, how also can you help your author help your reader?</p>
<p>@Hilary: It&#8217;s okay if you&#8217;re not good at it. (If everyone was great at self-editing, I wouldn&#8217;t be an editor!) Just have someone else read it through for you to catch at least the basic grammar errors and most of all give feedback on how it presents. If you&#8217;re reading through yourself, again, just wait at least a few hours after you&#8217;ve written it to give yourself some distance and patience.<br />
<span class="cluv"> Steph&#8217;s last blog post&#8230; <a href="http://www.in-other-words-blog.com/2010/01/bellas-bookshelves/" rel="nofollow">Bella’s Bookshelves</a> </span></p>
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		<title>By: Hilary</title>
		<link>http://siriusgraphix.com/how-to-be-good-part-1/comment-page-1#comment-283</link>
		<dc:creator>Hilary</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Jan 2010 14:04:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Steph .. I know it&#039;s an area I&#039;m not good at - I read some of my posts to my mother and wonder what on earth I was thinking - but that&#039;s life.  I just know that to move the blog on I need to do the editing etc and revamp my thoughts, though not the concept.

Good to be here and read some more gems, and learn some new things -
Hilary Melton-Butcher
Positive Letters Inspirational Stories
.-= Hilary&#039;s last blog post... &lt;a href=&quot;http://positiveletters.blogspot.com/2010/01/haggis-whisky-and-poetry-means-only-one.html&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Haggis, Whisky and Poetry .. means only one thing &quot;Robbie Burns&quot;&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Steph .. I know it&#8217;s an area I&#8217;m not good at &#8211; I read some of my posts to my mother and wonder what on earth I was thinking &#8211; but that&#8217;s life.  I just know that to move the blog on I need to do the editing etc and revamp my thoughts, though not the concept.</p>
<p>Good to be here and read some more gems, and learn some new things -<br />
Hilary Melton-Butcher<br />
Positive Letters Inspirational Stories<br />
<span class="cluv"> Hilary&#8217;s last blog post&#8230; <a href="http://positiveletters.blogspot.com/2010/01/haggis-whisky-and-poetry-means-only-one.html" rel="nofollow">Haggis, Whisky and Poetry .. means only one thing &quot;Robbie Burns&quot;</a> </span></p>
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		<title>By: Lance</title>
		<link>http://siriusgraphix.com/how-to-be-good-part-1/comment-page-1#comment-280</link>
		<dc:creator>Lance</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 27 Jan 2010 03:21:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Steph,
Great thoughts!  I&#039;d put myself in the self-editing camp, and truthfully...I know it&#039;s not something I focus much on.  Or at least, I don&#039;t focus on with a eye for my reader.  So...great thoughts for me, as I work at polishing what I have...
.-= Lance&#039;s last blog post... &lt;a href=&quot;http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/JungleOfLife/~3/mVyV_CXZHWk/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Powered By Laughter&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Steph,<br />
Great thoughts!  I&#8217;d put myself in the self-editing camp, and truthfully&#8230;I know it&#8217;s not something I focus much on.  Or at least, I don&#8217;t focus on with a eye for my reader.  So&#8230;great thoughts for me, as I work at polishing what I have&#8230;<br />
<span class="cluv"> Lance&#8217;s last blog post&#8230; <a href="http://feedproxy.google.com/~r/JungleOfLife/~3/mVyV_CXZHWk/" rel="nofollow">Powered By Laughter</a> </span></p>
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		<dc:creator>Tweets that mention How to Be Good: Part 1 &#124; Sirius Graphix -- Topsy.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 23:51:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Wendi Kelly, Deb Dorchak. Deb Dorchak said: How to Be Good: Part 1 http://goo.gl/fb/5EP5 [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] This post was mentioned on Twitter by Wendi Kelly, Deb Dorchak. Deb Dorchak said: How to Be Good: Part 1 <a href="http://goo.gl/fb/5EP5" rel="nofollow">http://goo.gl/fb/5EP5</a> [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Betsy Wuebker</title>
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		<dc:creator>Betsy Wuebker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 22:12:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yay, Steph is here, and that&#039;s so nice!  You&#039;re right, the reader is the customer and so thinking, &quot;what&#039;s in it for them&quot; is a good way to focus.  Sure, we have something to say, but is it honestly going to resonate with the audience? Thanks.
.-= Betsy Wuebker&#039;s last blog post... &lt;a href=&quot;http://passingthru.com/2010/01/what-goes-around-comes-around/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;What Goes Around, Comes Around&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yay, Steph is here, and that&#8217;s so nice!  You&#8217;re right, the reader is the customer and so thinking, &#8220;what&#8217;s in it for them&#8221; is a good way to focus.  Sure, we have something to say, but is it honestly going to resonate with the audience? Thanks.<br />
<span class="cluv"> Betsy Wuebker&#8217;s last blog post&#8230; <a href="http://passingthru.com/2010/01/what-goes-around-comes-around/" rel="nofollow">What Goes Around, Comes Around</a> </span></p>
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		<title>By: Deb Dorchak</title>
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		<dc:creator>Deb Dorchak</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 20:00:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good to have you here Steph! Thanks for joining us on Tuesdays.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good to have you here Steph! Thanks for joining us on Tuesdays.</p>
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		<title>By: steph</title>
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		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 16:10:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>PS. The link to me doesn&#039;t work!
.-= steph&#039;s last blog post... &lt;a href=&quot;http://bellasbookshelves.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/tea-talk/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Tea Talk&lt;/a&gt; =-.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>PS. The link to me doesn&#8217;t work!<br />
<span class="cluv"> steph&#8217;s last blog post&#8230; <a href="http://bellasbookshelves.wordpress.com/2010/01/25/tea-talk/" rel="nofollow">Tea Talk</a> </span></p>
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		<title>By: steph</title>
		<link>http://siriusgraphix.com/how-to-be-good-part-1/comment-page-1#comment-275</link>
		<dc:creator>steph</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 26 Jan 2010 16:08:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey team,

Thanks for inviting me! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey team,</p>
<p>Thanks for inviting me! <img src='http://siriusgraphix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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